Hi,
I've had a shot idea for a little while, and I thought it'd be fun to start fleshing it out in lieu of my mental break from my current shot.
I realize this dialogue might be too long, but here's the idea:
News anchor introduces a segment and turns it over to his field guy for commentary. You know how sometimes the audio seems to take forever to transfer over to the field reporter, so everyone's left staring in an awkward silence until it finally reaches him? I want to show the two reporters in the same screen, with the field reporter up in the corner. The anchor says his blurb, and meanwhile the field reporter is standing in oblivious, goofy silence. After a couple of seconds, the anchor gets a little uneasy ("Can he hear me or not?") and shifty, but tries to maintain his professionalism. FINALLY, the field reporter starts to answer, then cut. I want to play up the length of the silence so that it's exaggerated but also realistic in comparison to how it really happens in the news.
I'm not sure if this could be entertaining or not, but I think it's something we all think when we're watching the news. At least I do. The point of the shot is to have subtle humor, but mostly an exercise in showing subtext and thought process.
Any thoughts?
https://www.dropbox.com/s/4df9yiyys0zkqj1/Hey%20Will.wav?dl=0
Thanks a bunch!
Jamie