Hi Andriy, this staging is working much better. Reads very clearly. Keep the doctor focused on the body for the first phrase of dialog - he's probably never seen one before, and is terrified. I think he could end in a stronger pose, something that really shows his anger and indignity. I like the pose on the mafia guy, but the action in his hand (wiping?) is distracting away from the doctor. Looking good!
Hi Andriy, this staging is working much better. Reads very clearly. Keep the doctor focused on the body for the first phrase of dialog - he's probably never seen one before, and is terrified. I think he could end in a stronger pose, something that really shows his anger and indignity. I like the pose on the mafia guy, but the action in his hand (wiping?) is distracting away from the doctor. Looking good!
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