Hi!!
I thought I'd check in, I tried addressing all the notes from Wednesday. I worked out more of the spine issues as well as loosening up the head and neck. Tracking the nose revealed a bunch! I also moved the weight more SR when he does the shift, and adjusted the SR elbow to be less foreshortened. How's that working?
Also, how is the overall timing of the reaction at the end? I added a bit more love to that movement but I'm having a hard time seeing if it needs more or less time before he reacts for thought process.
https://syncsketch.com/playground/437260a906574ef697a78d0a56f24ee2#122181
Moving forward: I plan on sweetening the timing and movement of the wipe of the mouth. I've been antsy to do that but wanted to get all the larger movements fixed first.
Let me know what you all think! Thanks a bunch :)
- Diana
Hi Diana,
ReplyDeletePhysicality here is working MUCH better. Still need to lessen the S.L. arm stretching around 42. Maybe raise chair up so elbow doesn't have to stretch as far? I think the amount of thinking time before his final reaction feels right, but the reaction itself is a bit too snappy. I'm okay with the face being snappy, but I'd tone down the body movement timing. You can just let the body grown into a pose, with the sharpness being in the eyes. Is there anything you can offset a bit in this last change? Maybe delay the S.R. hand on the chair?
Cool, Thanks Victor! This is really helpful.
DeleteLooking good, Diana!
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